最后20天攻克考研英语“关系”类作文

文都教育    2014年12月10日 AA

  冲刺到今天,考生们可谓是即将迎来曙光。目前考研英语作文可谓是“押宝”的一大环节。都教授自然也会为各位考生带来最给力的“干货”。下面我们从2005年考研英语一的大作文真题入手,来详解2015年考研英语一大作文的两大“关系”类话题作文。

  一、真题再现

  【2005年考研英语一大作文】

  Directions:

  Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing the interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.

  You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)

  

 

  【题目分析】

  2005年英语一大作文依然采用了惯有的图画作文的形式。这篇作文从命题的角度来看反映了其特点:主题具有一定的普遍性,中心思想为社会热点问题,使得考生有话可说,有内容可写。

  如图所示,一位老父亲正在被自己成年的孩子们虐待。四个孩子分列于球场的四个角落。大儿子像发球一样蜷缩成球状的父亲踢出去,其他几个孩子分别准备挡开父亲。很明显,没有人原意接受父亲。这里表现的是一个社会问题。越来越多的子女开始拒绝赡养老人。一般而言,不是他们经济条件不够好,事实上,子女更喜欢独自享受舒适的生活,而不管曾将抚育自己长大的父母如今境遇如何。老人已经无法独自生活,又遭到子女的遗弃。

  我们可以明确该篇文章应采用“三段式”的逻辑思维方式。要注意结合政治中通过现象看本质的原理来分析图画中的问题。

  二、预测重点

  1.预测一:师生关系

  Teacher student Relationship

  1.师生关系的重要性;

  2.如何保持良好的师生关系。

  【范文】

  Teacher student relationship plays an important role in school life. A good relationship will make learning interesting and teaching enjoyable. A bad relationship, however, can make learning dull and teaching unpleasant.

  To have a good teacher student relationship, it is important that the teacher and the student understand each other and respect each other. The teacher must know that he should be neither too tough, nor too permissive. If he is too tough, the student may be frightened and discouraged. If he is too permissive, the student may become lazy and careless. So his attitude should be between the two extremes. He should be strict yet friendly. As for a student, he should know that what the teacher does is for the benefit of his students. He should always show his proper respect to the teacher. Moreover, he should always be eager to learn and willing to work hard. If he is modest, he will learn more than just knowledge from his teacher.

  In one word, a good teacher student relationship can be mutually beneficial. The student may find the learning process both fruitful and enjoyable while the teacher may find his teaching satisfactory and pleasant.

  2.预测二:人际关系

  关于助人为乐Should we help others in need?

  1. 现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒,没人敢上前帮忙。

  2. 这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢?

  3. 你对此有何看法?

  【范文】

  Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what’s strange nowadays is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.

  Firstly, I think people’s moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.

  In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.

  乐于助人在中国传统文化中一直是一种美德。可是很奇怪的是,现在的人都不敢伸出援手去帮助那些需要帮助的人

  首先,我认为人们的道德意识已经退化。当利己主义获得了上风,许多人觉得越来越难去帮助别人。其次,毫无疑问一些不幸的事件结果证明是有着不良目的的陷阱。因此,老百姓变得越来越有危机意识而陷阱和骗局也变得越来越谨慎。

  总的来说,我主张应该热心肠,我认为我们应该热心提供帮助同时也留心潜在危险,以免被骗。

  通过今天的学习,希望各位考生都能将“关系”类作文掌握到位,攻克这一写作难题。人最大的对手,往往不是别人,而是自己的懒惰。你必须拼尽全力,才有资格说运气不够好。祝各位考生好运!