2010年考研英语写作命题理论分析

2009年08月26日 来源:人民网教育
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    写好漫画类作文,一般有以下几个步骤:
    
    (1)根据所给的漫画以及漫画的文字叙述内容,提炼漫画的主题。例如,
    
    Example:
    
    DIRECTIONS:A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET II.C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:
    
    解析:漫画中,母鸡下蛋后十分骄傲的表情,并吹嘘到:“本母鸡下的蛋没有棱角,保证有蛋皮,蛋清,蛋黄。”可见,母鸡为之骄傲和吹嘘的事情实为分内之事,无须大势渲染。正如,“如此承诺”中概括的一样:各行各业兴承诺,欢迎监督不推脱,原本皆为分内事,何须高唱文明歌。综上所述,漫画主题为“承诺分内事”。
    
    (2)根据要求(direction),确定文章段落的数量和段落的内容,即文章的提纲。
    
    解析:1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.
    
    2. Give your comments
    
    根据提纲中的信息1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 本文开头需要两个段落,即客观描述漫画段,引出暗含主题段。
    
    根据提纲中的信息2. Give your comments 本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论,即持有该观点的原因和最后得出的结论。
    
    即,文章由四个段落组成:客观描述漫画段—主题段—原因段—对策段。
    
    (3)根据提纲要求,利用恰当语句组段成篇。
    
    SAMPLE
    
    As is shown in the cartoon, the hen that has just laid an egg is shouting, with her head raised high, "I ensure that my egg brings no corners and that it consists of such three parts as eggshell, egg white and yolk."
    
    What I've mentioned above is the surface messages conveyed by the cartoon. It seems from the hen's proud look that she is expected to make a promise for the egg she lays. It fact, it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty.
    
    There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing, the social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades tend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another, they're not prepared to face the challenge and as a result, they can do little except declare their own duty as something praiseworthy.
    
    In my opinion, every trade should try every means to improve its competitive forces instead of boasting like the hen in the cartoon. Therefore, I draw my conclusion that just as a hen shouldn't promise for her egg, so no trade in the society should boast themselves for something within their duty and that they should work hard to provide more benefits for the society. In a word, try not to be like the boasting hen in our life!
    
    不难发现,要想写出一篇高分作文须具备两个条件:一是扎实的英语语言基础,尤其是书写语句的基础;二是掌握一定的写作技巧,重点在于写作的步骤与流程。即,
    
    步骤一、利用漫画提炼主题。根据漫画场景、人物表情以及文字提示等信息,综合把握漫画所传递的信息,确定文章的中心思想。
    
    步骤二、利用direction的要求安排文章结构。文章写几段,每段写什么内容完全取决于direction的要求,一定要做到客观。
    
    步骤三、恰当语句组段成篇。利用中心思想和文章结构来组织语句,组织篇章。


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